Not uber scary, but I wanted to try something psychological…the imagination can be much scarier than movies or revealing writing.

mhm…nice, nice…but what i really want to say…do you guys have RADIOS on the bus?? not fair, man, not fair.

Some of ours do but mine doesnt

Cool, sorry ‘bout the grade

1. Most school buses (if that’s what you’re referring to) have radios built into the ceilings, at least all the ones I’ve been on. In this story, however, it’s a city bus. “She” is a woman, not a schoolgirl.

I always appreciate the psychological, and this one definitely is suggestive of a few possibilities. Neat idea.

Ominous how the song would follow her where ever she goes. It must have Otherworldly designs.

oohh REALLY stovohobo

way to scab my idea about integrating rhymes into your scary story

kidding kidding this was great

i agree with your own comment lol that its not uber scary but i like it – it plays with your mind and makes you imagine what that would be like if it were you

what happened to her house though? or are you leaving it open ended – expectant for a win?!?! ;)

creeeepy.

The part of the radio is not relevant. She hears this whether she wants to or not and thinks it is a broadcast song. Great job. True it is not Uber scary but hit us with a uber scary sequel