Beautiful…really liked the imagery of the second paragraph.

nice imagery. i like your style, the way you describe things really brings every thing into a clear focus

This series seems to have a very nice potential. I very much like the descriptions and imagery in all of these.

ok now im starting to think that you MUST have heard of Medea, for it too is a Greek Tragedy with mythical background so…if not then that is just too uncanny

loved this – the ending was perfect

haha, funnily enough i haven’t…im just going off the crappy way zeus treats all the women he…ahem…gets ‘involved’ with. they usually end up dying or being exiled. :$