Ooohh. I like this. It starts so nice and and lovely, but then there’s a twist at the end. It’s very well written.

awesome poem, I wish I could write peotry like that. such depth.

niceeee!! as always, great talent and emotion displayed. :)

How odd. Third poem I’ve read tonight. The first was about a dream. The second was about a cloud. And now this, a dream with clouds and storms and stuff. Your poem was the best of the three, by the way.