it is amazing that you have managed to capture all that emotion into that poem. it’s kinda funny tho, i’m the only black girl in my town too. lol.

Really puts discrimination into perspective, how cruel some people can be- its the content of character that matters most. amazingly beautifuly written poem that will stick in my mind long after I have read a1,000 more ficlets.

Great emotion, and we can see it through her eyes. I like it.