Ooh, chilling, absolutely chilling depiction of a relationship sunk by entropy. Awesome. One of your best so far, I think.

I agree with THX , a beautiful ficlet void of your usual paranormal propaganda and yet one of your best…I love the title and the “bonelessly” part. Perfect description.

Love it – you have such great ficlet talent!!!

Her cynicism,and the fact Tommy seems oblivios that things have drastically changed in the relationship, were what got me the most, if hes not oblivious at least he’s trying to bring back something to the relationship/marriage,and bus’ll part was awesome

I love this! It’s so indicative of what happens in a lot of relationships today.

That’s so sad…turns the picture from something simply beautiful into something intensely poignant. The “business relationship” line in particular is heartbreaking.

Why do most people end up this way? Why do they get so compliant with boredom? It sucks that this story is so true, but you hit the issue on the head.