Hmm…I like the description of music by one who has not heard it before. Very nice!

I understand this isn’t a strong story by itself, but it was an idea I had and I wanted to try it on some readers. It is hard to describe human things from a non-human point of view, an oceanic view. That is my challenge.

It had an otherworldly feel, like they were mermaids or godessess,or amazons or some mythical beings.

they are merfolk! I guess I’ll work on this, making it more evident. I’ve been planning on expanding this one.

Reminds me of The Little Mermaid, but I love that movie, so good job.
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Would’ve been helpful to have separate paragraphs & a better indication of who was talking.

aw, this is pretty good! I like the idea behind it and the descriptions which I’m sure were challenging!

i like the spunkiness of the princess.