Not bad. Very dramatic. Not sure about the ‘you are my son’ line, but maybe I’m just being nit-picky.

Well, it’s fine if you don’t like it, but I’m crying now. Really, it’s fine! Really…[sniff]. Seeing as it’s…as it’s…oh, it’s the biggest line in the series! Waaaahhhh, oh, boo, I say! Boo-hoo!

aww she died, and don’t cry Stovo, I enjoyed it, it works for the story. excellent as usual.

I KNEW IT !!
i figured out from the last ficlet in this series
nice twist that she died

poor mrs st. paul….i didnt really like her though…so no hard feelings from me

I liked it too. I hope the doctors can revive her so she can talk about his father.

Wheee, I made someone cry! I get in so much trouble when I do that at work.

Ha, I would imagine so…

i liked the story but the comments were better, no ‘fense…you are twisted, THX . “Wheeeeee…”

Great stuff stove

hahha, i agree w/ blueyedwonder.. whee? i haven’t said tht in years. and tht’s an insult, seeing as i’m 12.
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i soo knew it=]