nice twist

i like the outlook of simone as a god…in that it seems like she isnt going to be able to fully use her powers somehow…perhaps someone will be able to stop her during her time of lack of action?!

we shall wait and see…

Aw, crap. The end is nigh, ain’t it?

Excellent return to Simone by the way.

Awesome! Just about any piece of writing that casually drops the word “hemophage” is awesome, anyway, but this is all-around awesome, from its head to its toes.

She wished that Zeus had left a handbook to explain what she should do next.
As far as I can recall, becoming a deity is very difficult.

I love the “boy wizard” phrase, I’m not sure if it has been used before, but it amused me. {Boy wizard usually means Harry Potter these days. Thanks for taking it back.}