I had some earlier—it was uh-frikkin-mazing. I could live off that stuff.

A story told from the point of view of a loaf of bread? I’ve got to give you points for a unique perspective on this one, though a little disturbing.

Hey—when the ultimate taste hits your tongue, your brain gets a little shocked. My writing may show the aftereffects.

Well written and such a wonderful twist at the end. I did not see it coming at all!

Oops, forgot to give you my rating. Here are your stars, you deserve them. ;)

Haha that was amazing. Very nice twist.

I was like, she cuts him and bites him, what a sick twisted character you wrote, then I find out its BREAD !!!. Your an evil story telling genuis!

i love this!!!!

Sitting in the dark, shivering.
I’ll never look at bread the same way again.

[laughing at amaster’s comment]
i had to reread this again and again and i was still confoozed i’m like “what?!” and then it’s all “bread.” so i’m like oh. nice job =]
i make a mean banana bread, but then again my specialty meal is ramen noodles. :-/

dude, i thought you were like making out with a like vampire!
But then you’re all homemade bread, and i’m like wat the. . .
nice description though.
i was gonna say, why would anyone wanna bight a person oww!

Holy crap, I love that!

wow, bread, how long did it take for you to come up with that??? weird, but funny.