as usual

very lovely

and i’m giving you 5 stars just for using the word – tatterdemalion

a very humanist story and a topic people should be more aware of :)

Hey, wait, I was gonna’ give bonus points for tatterdemalion, but now it just sounds redundant. I thought the angle was neat, but the second half petered out a little.

tatterdemalion < cool word! best homeless person story I have read on ficlets! very mature style. You can do funy like no other, but I’m now very impressed with you even more with this ficlet.

Well, THX , I apologize. The story was actually longer, but I couldn’t fit it all in, and the second half wasn’t really sequel-ish. If that makes sense.