As much as I loved Howie’s ending to the story (and I did love Howie’s ending, with the way it exploited every plot hole and dangling thread to come to a logical conclusion), I find this one more satisfying.
Thanks, Tarzan. I also really liked Howie’s ending, but it was a cliff-hanger. I think — for those who have been patient enough to read this whole damn thing — they deserved something much more final (and thus, I hope, satisfying). Glad you approve.
Oh, and I did get Howie’s permission before I wrote more on top of his ending. I wouldn’t have felt right with doing it otherwise.
I agree with Tarzan, Howie’s ending was good, but this one just gives it that sense of closure, letting the story almost come full circle. Great job on both your parts.
I just read this whole thing in nearly one sitting, and I must say that I do agree that this ending is more satisfying. I would probably hate the world if it were suddenly paradise, because that’s just the kind of girl I am.
Nick
Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars
Nick
♠Ana Cristina♥
Alexa ♥
artistsrunwild
Nick
Fyora Cartagan