The first line comes from Afterglow by Vanessa Carlton.

I like the last line best. I have felt that way many times, myself.

God. I bet most everyone would give anything to go back. =]
nice jobb =]

I love the last line too. It’s so hard to realize that things go on in life, even when yours has stopped…

You portray the ache of regret and last love very well here.

This is amazingly portrayed. I love all your work, but this one stands out among the rest. Such a familiar feeling!

ohh wow. the way you wrote this made me feel everything that she was feeling, all the hurt. i loved the last line! wonderful writing!