This is a powerful little story. You make the reader really care about the characters and what’s happening to them. Good writing.

I would like to read a sequel.

Opening line taken from the lyrics of “Kissing the Lipless” by the Shins.

Laine, if you want a sequel, write i! = )

Awesome.

Saint Chuck

You are my hero.

The Shins are the ultimate best band ever.

I salute you.

heavy. you catch a lot of awkwardness here well.