I wasn’t sure if suicide should be marked as mature content or not.
the story was inspired by the song ‘A Happy Medium’ by Malcom Middleton

Oh my god! At first I thought maybe he was in love or something…but wow. I loved the line, “I exchanged looks with Paul that clearly said what in the world did he eat this morning?” That was great. But this story is so sort of…gruesome..sad…nice job!

Oh, I’ve never marked my suicide stories mature, so I don’t know…

wow that was intense from start to finish, >looking around at the trees and basking in the breeze, very poetic line
1st ficlet of yours Ive read. You’re really talented..

I really loved this, especially the ending that’s so unexpected given the tone of the piece. Awesome.

I agree with pie, I didn’t expect that ending, but I’m assuming that was the point. nice job. 5 *s.