It’s not messed up,it’s rather good actually, add more it’s intriguing. should eneter in into THX0477 ’s defense mechanism challenge sounds like denial. or something..
I agree with Kermit! But I think you get 5 stars!:)
I like this! And yeah, it does sound like denial or something…this is very nice writing!
Don’t call it that, its worth reading. This is good. It shows some raw feelings like you must have just written the feeling that you had at the time.
Kermitgorf
Lone Writer
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Note In a Broken Bottle