Nice story start.

Great story. There was one typo that I noticed in the second line (or maybe you meant to write it this way, I wasn’t sure). You wrote “her mouth gapped in disbelief” but I think you meant to write “gaped”. Anyways, I enjoyed this story a lot, it was very entertaining! Good job :)

~mk

Indeed I did mean “gaped.” Thanks for the catch, Mk.

I liked this a lot! Very entertaining, like Mk said. Nice job!

A lot of drama in one tiny space, how could she not know? At least she would be taken care of, and he child. That’s a happy ending. :)