Comments on Giving and Getting [Kermitgorf's Holiday Challenge] by ♠Ana Cristina♥

Kermitgorf

LOL hysterical, just what I wanted, funny dialogue. Perfection!!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:57:31.
Kermitgorf

She didn’t want anything huh? LOL
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:57:31.
THX 0477

Ah, what an unhealthy relationship. Nice peak into an intimate interchange.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:57:31.
Jenunique

G-O-L-D-E….. wonderful!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:57:31.
One Time, One Chance

hahahhaa.. golde? baha =]
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:57:31.
SupRspi

Cute. Great look at a conversation that is sort of darkly funny I guess. Great use of dialogue – I just finished my entry, and it’s more challenging than I realized to write with just dialogue, like you I didn’t include any description at all – nothing outside the quotation marks.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:57:31.
Storykeeper of Fae

Did anyone else picture the guy as a mobster? Pretty good stuff.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:57:31.
insomniac

hee hee.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:57:31.