You should sequel it. separate into paragraphs make it more readable. very interesting and well written horror story.

great 1st entry on ficlets. welcome to the site.

I think the point, primarily, is to have others sequel your stories. There’s nothing particularly wrong with sequeling your own, but if you’re going to do that, why not just throw it on a blog?

The fun is moving other peoples ideas forward and see what strangers make of your attempt.

Thanks for the comments, I’m still trying to get used to the format.

I think your story is excellent, by the way. If I wasn’t at work, I might have taken a stab at a sequel.

Great thoughts! This is very thought-provoking.

awesome… i love it!!