I like the second person narrative (is that right?) anyway, I really feel like it’s me in that story because of the nature of the writing - not nessecarily because I’m anything like the main character lol. At this rate you’ll have written a novel comprised entirely of ficlets. atta boy - keep it up.

Great sequel.

Really nice! I also like the second person narrative…very unique! You don’t see too much of that. And I don’t know if it’s the point of view or what, but I really find myself sympathizing with you character.

awsome! very good. and I can totally understand what your character is going through. ((no I havn’t been there but I can understand))

aww!

aww.. its a painful kind of love.. the one that will never be returned..Its difficult not to get emotionally invested in stories like these