Thanks for the read. I’m not into writing right now but I wanna add something to this—once my energy is up. Nice Job setting the scene and the characters are easy to visualize even w/o much description.

you should write a sequel

You should! I wanna know what Derick wants to ask her…come on! Keep it coming, girl!

lol I want to no what he says to! sequel please??

I like your scoccer stories even though I don’t play, I could see it in my mind. You should write a sequel your a great writer. Keep writtting!