Good its like a poem and story combined well written.

I like this. It’s sadness is warming because I’m sure we’ve all felt this way. But there’s still an air of hope.

Good job turning that picture into a well realized story. I felt for your character.

reminds me of the marshmellows in lucky charms. Sorry, that was uncalled for.

That was a nice poem, I liked it.

that was really good.