wow.. that was really hard to read! maybe try using actual spellings and save the AIM talk for AIM . I don’t mean to sound mean but it was very hard to read and understand when you write like that..

I agree. I couldn’t even make it all the way through. Spelling, grammar, punctuation, and formatting exist for a reason.

This might have been good, but I have no idea. Too hard to read. I tried reading it through, then skipping around. Still, nothing. I’m still trying so that I can give a positive rating. I can’t. Try a re-write in old people language, English. ;)

I have a strange enthusiasm for re-writing un-readable ficlets…But this one isn’t my type, I’ll just go with a translation to help you all out.