Sorry, my story had too many characters and I had to cut some and rewrite a little and in the process I deleted an “e” out of WE!!! Hope you enjoy it anyway.

LOL great entry. very funny, allergic to carrots, funny closing line.
Talent runs in your family, Jenunique’s ficlet was very funny as well about the reindeer& flying monkyes.

I’m a fan. You effectively grossed me out and made me laugh.

I LOVE it!!! Don’t you still have that can of Road Kill stew? Hope that’s not on the menu this year… I mean… The can is still on the counter, right? Unopened? ;)

I wouldn’t trust the Mississippi River water, disgusting! And I wouldn’t eat wildlife. Bring me a turkey any day!

I love the allergic to carrots line!

Awesome! Definitely one of the funnier ones. :)

blahahaha! this is gruesomely hilarious! [?] =)

Allergic to carrots…that’s great.

Great closing line. Way to use the punchline to effect.

My only beef is the lack of contractions. It seems stilted to me reading “We have found” and “It is packed”. Even a few would make the speaker more plausible.

Reading this I noticed both you and Jenunique format very well, with enough whitespace to make it very readable, a pet peeve of mine when it’s not around.

Very funny, albeit gross story. Allergic to carrots. lol