I like this.
I want to know where it’s going. Is the Great I the moon?

I like it as well. Very, very compelling. Nice job. : )

Excellent, I hope you like my addition.

Thanks guys. This is my first ficlet. I wasn’t sure whether I wanted to write a story myself or spark something off for someone else, and with this one I don’t really mind either way. I’m hoping someone will run with it, but if no one does, I’ll probably find another 1000 characters or so :)