I believe very strongly in your message.

Very, very nice. Just for aesthetic’s sake, maybe separations between paragraphs and dialogue? Other than that, very deep dialogue in here, and the “new brother” part intrigues me.

Lol, good job. The brother (even though I’m a girl, lol) reminds me of, well, me…

I think his wish was to be able to believe, and it was just granted by a little girl.