sounds like the beginning of a very good story. definately sparked my interest. mark manipulating his brothers so he could be alone with his mom. o.k. give me more!

sounds a bit like oedipus….lol…i just made an intriguing [albeit mature rated story] totally over-age/disgusting

well

only if you know anything about the oedipus complex – i shall refrain from explaining as that proves that its adult discussion time, no explanation needed :)

I totally agree with artistsrunwild, why else would the child bother? And why else would it be rated mature?

Oedipus Rex Jr., as some have suggested? Or just an effectively manipultive momma’s boy? Makes me hungry, and the subtle creepiness is great.

This is good. And exactly how brothers would probably act!! I like it!

Wow…um…yeah.

Ha. Mean little tyke. My mom loves Chinese food, and in fact, we usually choose pizza. =)

I LOVE CHINESE FOOD !!!!!!!!! chinese food in general is my favorite food. escpecially their lo mein.. mmm.. i’m hungry now thx a lot! =]
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aha! tht’s one way to save money!!

Love the psychologically oriented comments, though I do have to say the whole Oedipus complex isn’t a conscious drive…I mean, it’s not like that’s what he’s really thinking about in some sick, creepy way. Oh never mind.

LoA

I love this. I only have two and can imagine what it would be like with four…. shiver … Especially when it comes to food.