hmm.. there’s a lot of mystery in here, like who’s Sera? hurting in what way?
this totally begs for a prequel/sequel.=]

I agree that this begs for a sequel or prequel. Good first ficlet!

Nicely told, and very tragic. I’m not sure if it’s typos or something, but the middle has some clunky/redundant bits, around where the mom is taking her to the bed.

LoA