This definitely continued THX ’s “Aww” sense. Very good.
Great continuation. I loved the paragraph about, “I hugged her like I…” Really nice stuff, and thanks for doing a sequel! LoA
Great continuation. I loved the paragraph about, “I hugged her like I…” Really nice stuff, and thanks for doing a sequel!
LoA
Nice. I like the way this went. A little unreal but very touching.Which was the whole point of my story in the first place.To illustrate the powers of touch.
Wow. Wow. Wow.Really Sweet.
Awww…that’s all I can say.
thats so sweet!
Fyora Cartagan
THX 0477
DreamGhost
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