very nice. you should really write a sequel. 5 *’s =)
love the 2nd person narration, great story,
You should write a sequel, and yeah, the 2nd person thing was cool.~5 stars
Second person doesn’t exist! I liked the perspective, though…the way it was as if a hospital patient was being told how he/she got there. However, your tense changes were a bit confusing.
Second person doesn’t exist!
I liked the perspective, though…the way it was as if a hospital patient was being told how he/she got there. However, your tense changes were a bit confusing.
Interesting. A very good job of hinting at events past and setting up for events to come. LoA
Interesting. A very good job of hinting at events past and setting up for events to come.
LoA
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