theres a tornado, but no one saw it? haha nice. love it. keep going! 5*’s

This is getting interesting

I like how her story is becoming more entwined in Snap’s, and we discover both of them at the same time.

Snap sounds like a really interesting character and i like his name :) . I can’t wait to find out more about him and his willingness to talk to Marriane

Marianne* sorry

It really is getting interesting…and I love the title on this one!

Thanx a lot!

wow- a random tornado. nice twist.