Thats really funny! Some constructed critisism would be to end the story on a cliff hanger so it would be easier for people to continue the story.

Thanks, I’ll keep that in mind. :)

Che Guevara’s parrot, nice

I have to disagree with Invisa-girl. This story has plenty of room for a sequel or prequel. How did they get on the planet? What planet is it? Where did everyone else go? And the characterization is stellar. I really want to know more about these guys.
It was also damned funny. Great work.

Inappropriate times and locations are the hallmarks of a good argument, though. It’s the distance from the subject of consideration, both literally and figuratively that helps maintain an objective analysis… or confused ignorance. ~_^

Absolutely hilarious mocking of the character type to have him railing against corporations and governments ten years after civilization as they know it has come to an end. Beating a dead horse? Arguing the moot point? Yep, and he’s not showing any signs of stopping.
LoA