wow, oh the suspence!!

XD, funny!
(4 stars)

wow, nice. 4*’s

I heart it. Very descriptive.

Haha! How interesting it is to see characters under stress…

In print, thoughts are italicized not put in quotes, I just learned that myself.
Ha ha, this is funny. I pictured a nervous one lady band tapping with every extremity at once—kinda crazy to imagine. Loved how the Beep mocked her.