haha just a correction, quick:
i noticed that you put “linds stated” or “chels replyed” after ever thing one of them said. that’s like in a story somebody going
she said
he said
she said
he said
and it gets too repititive. i did the same thing in my challenge class and i got in twouble for it..
but otherwise – i can’t wait for the sequel!

very nice. haha. there goes there plans. guess their waiting till the xmas break ;)

yep..it was Saturday…
maybe Band is right maybe xmas break is a good shot.

I agree with OTOC to much repetitve Lindsay said/Chels said try changing it up with she. Very good though :]

this is really good beside the repeating. i can’t wait to hear about a sequel. keep writing.