Awww. That’s sad.

Wow, you’re quick! I love “Not quite an error” and couldn’t help trying to add to the emotional weight of what happened there by exploring how he lost his wife.

Clever prequel, Kevin – great descriptions that transition into the next story quite well…

Beautiful. Sets it up almost exactly as I had envisioned the backstory: a scientist whose wife had passed away, and was now buried in his work in denial.

Terribly heavy and very real. Nicely done. Really, I’m all depressed now. I think I need to go watch cartoons or something.
LoA

Very nicely done. I especially like how you come back to the ‘converted room’ motif at the end. Beautiful.