I have to check out this “City of Heroes.” Sounds like a great game. Great job!

i like that it’s told from the daddy’s perspective.. and the hint to backstory.
LoA

I agree, I love perspective switch.

I love the how the same story is told from the two different perspectives. Great job, I need to read the rest.

I love that this is told from the dad’s POV , it gives a different feel to the same scene. Masterfully written.