Absolutely lovely. I’m not usually a fan of vampire stories, but this is definitely a great exception.

I’d love to see you write more, in this or other things.

Excellent!

hmmmmm, more of this? I’ll work on it. If they arent rubbish, I might even post them.

It’s… unusual, but in a good way. Too many vampire stories go all dark and gloomy. This one seems (dare I say it) whimsical. A vampire that cares about his prey, even if only to improve the taste. Makes it a little creepier too, though, that the people really don’t know a thing till they get eaten. I would love to see more!

I like this one. I really don’t like vampire stories, but the focus is more on their psychological, seductive nature. Pretty good.