This is good. Great entry!

Very well written. I love how it repeats itself, almost without the narrator realizing it, exactly like the way a sleep deprived person would act and think.

i love the repeating line of “i wonder if you can die of sleep deprivation” flowed very well with the rest of the story – awesome job!

Thanks guys. =)

This is one of the best ones so far, I think…I too love the repetition of “I wonder if you can die from sleep deprivation.” It added a really real feel and flow.
LoA