haha, brilliant.

You have a knack for sci-fi writing, and this shows off your talent. I like how you brought up details like OS upgrades, credit rating, model numbers, and so on – adding to the believability / sense of realism. Outstanding work!

I love the last line—Unless he missed two consecutive payments. That’s the perfect ending!

Hilarious, especially the bit about the filter on the vidphone. Brilliant side innovation to the main plot. I love those in sci-fi and fantasies, little bits that aren’t required for the plot but just show that you’re thinking ahead to extraneous possibilities to create not just a story but an entire world. It gives depth, I think is what I’m saying, if I’m saying anything at all.
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I love how all your ficlets are so full of detail. It’s like you automatically have a repository of jargon in the back of your mind, but it sounds so perfect and hilarious when written! Great job.
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that was fabulous although I hope in the future that less than 89% of marriages will end in divorce

This is fantastic. Like others have said, it’s the little details that really make it. That, and the last line. Priceless!