Nice rhythm and flow to it, though it seems to have wound up a little depressing instead of the uplifting, hopeful peace the challenge asked for. On its own, a lovely, touching poem; in terms of the challenge, didn’t feel very uplifted.LoA
i find it okay. i like it.
I agree with THX , but I also thought that there was some pretty powerful imagery in there. The word choice was good.
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