Perfect set-up…now I have to think of something that will come next! :)

Very nice imagery, give me more :)

S.J.

nice twist. Didn’t expect that. We do need to know what comes next!

Nice set-up. Cool twist. What happens next?!

Hey, I really like your story!

Omg very haunting and descriptive, it made me feel like I was there. now you have me gasping for air.