Hi Heygabe, if you look you’ll see that was the directive in the challenge (see the prequel). I was supposed to have too much alliteration. Thanks for the comment! :-) LoA
That’s awesome. I started out just skimming it, but then the rhyme and meter pulled me in, and I had to go back and read it out loud. That sort of thing takes a lot of talent. Great job!
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