ummmm this is awkward, it doesn’t really sound like a ficlet, it sounds more like you just yelling at somebody, with no rhythm or anything, not the kind of thing that I would post on a writing website, very very strange…

umm. ok.its ok i guess. i usually love your writing. this one i’m not so crazy about though. :p

i think sometimes people just need to get their feelings out and maybe this was the only way you could do. You go girl!