aww that’s sad. And its so well written you can feel the cut and you kind of wince. great job!

wow. this got to me. i really felt it. your writing is just amazing. i can feel the cut, the incision, the pain. i can see the girl faking her smile (because that’s what i was doing all day) Great job once again.

E.

I totally agree with the above. I won’t restate it all though =)

I agree with this totally and completely and I know what it is to fake smiles and happiness – all of it. and the reason I do is for other people, because that’s what I know they want to see: Because I know that’s what they think of me. Sweet, loving, innoscent, happy, bubbly, is what they expect to see. So that’s what I show them.
Excellent job in portraying the pain and reasons going through this girl’s head.

wow. thats really all i can say. its funny how you can put all that emotion into somthing like that. and well all the other things i have to say have already been said so i wont sound like a broked record here.