Well, I found them both, and I like where you’ve gone with them. The baby is a person now. I wonder what will happen next? And how will the baby be the dawn of a new world?
I thought this was really good. I liked how you took the character from my story and turned her from someone who drank the Kool-Aid and accepted what had been done to her into a woman that will do anything to protect her child. Well done.
♠Ana Cristina♥
Mistress Elsha Hawk
Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars
♠Ana Cristina♥