Oh my, this is so sad! But very nicely written.
LoA

Oh, oh, this is so, so sad! I like how it’s told from the point of view of the little girl (at least, that’s what I was imagining). Beautiful portrayal of the scariness of drunk driving.
LoA

This is really, really sad! I love how it’s in first person and we go through it as it’s happening. Great job!

awwww so sad!!!!