skin cancer! that is terrible
I’m in tears and you did an awesome job with the challenge!
I hope you win!

the last line makes this perfect.

i agree with OTOC , it is. great job!!

wow.

Well done someday_93
This is really fantastic and exactly what I was hoping for when I wrote this challenge – a perfect story that reveals layers as it continues!
Wonderfully written!

And Blusparrow – a bruise doesnt mean skin cancer – it refers to there being something wrong with the blood cells when one has cancer, especially leukemia and that they rupture easily, thus causing a bruise
Skin cancer is shown by black growths normally around moles

Thanks so much for entering someday

Cancer. shiver. I do not have fond memories involving cancer…This is so sad.

Awww, this is really sad but oh so good.

i hope its not a true story very vivid . It grabs your attention instantly Bravo!

You did a really awesome job but it hit a bad nerve with me. I’m sorry I’m just so tired of reading stories where the people with cancer always die. Most people who do get cancer end up dying but a lot don’t. Why do writer never tell that story? Going through hell and coming out the other side. I’m sorry for ranting. You did a beautiful job. It’s just this means a lot to me. People with cancer need hope… not more stories about death.

i understand what culture shock is saying, but i loved it, it was sad, but amazing