Ooo very good. I love your manipulation of language and beautiful litteracy. Your descriptions are delightful, and the story peaks my interests. Bravo! If you don’t mind, I’ve added you and it’d be wonderful if you could add me.
Also, if your in the mood…Perhaps you could right the philosophical exploration of your pen name?
—Cat the Dancing Mouse

Haha—I don’t think you’d want me to do that. The last time people tried to get it out of me, it resulted in a very large confusion, my name getting around very, very fast, and an ongoing argument with another user who thought I was a creepy kid she knew who was stalking her. We got it sorted out in the end, but it wasn’t pretty.
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On another note, of course I’ll add you! =)

Haha. I understand, and thanks for adding me. Well, if you change your mind…I don’t have a close date.
—Cat the Dancing Mouse

Intriguing continuation with a very good job at deepening the story and adding to the mystery while adding more detail. Quite a deft touch.
LoA

I love where this series is going, great idea!You really make these scenes come to life with your vivid descriptions, while still keeping the plot the center focus of the story.
LoA
(I remembered! Maybe only cuz THX did it…but hey, better than nothing.)

Haha, I must admit, I barely ever remember to add the “LoA” to the end of my comments.
LoA

indee.. indiscker.. indiscernee.. what??