That’s funny. I mean, really funny. Having spent some time in Canada and having marveled at the oddity that is curling, the idea of a violent, underground league is perversely amusing. It’s like the Canadian equivalent of full contact golf. LoA
always thought curling was an odd sport. you painted a vivid and funny image. with the brooms and all, the cut throatedness in your underground game was fight clubish lol. LoA
hehehe. The images you give are serious and strong but the idea is funny and that’s a hard dynamic to juggle, but you succeeded. The descriptions are great—easy to imagine.
I love the mystery of what the heck the sport was, or maybe I was just being stupid. It went from running, to rock climbing, to ice climbing, to broomball, and then finally I got it. Curling. Hilarious. I enjoyed it.
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