Wow. This is beautiful, and so, so sad. I think I’m in love. ;-]

When the dad started to cry, THAT was the emotional pinnacle for me in reading this. I can’t stand to see men cry! You KNOW it hurts.

Awwww, this is sooo sad and really…wow. It almost made me cry when it said she memorized what number he was on the wall. It all really got emotional when the dad cried, like said above. Wow, this is really nice.

This is really nice. It was so sad reading that the dad cried!!
LoA

soooooooooooooooooooo sad!
I would of cried if I haven’t had such a good day.

My how poetic. Truly captivating flow to the story. My favorite part is all of the other places his name should be, like the tree, and in icing on the cake—because if his name is on the cake, he is still alive. Great job.

okay, i hate to ruin this whole moment where everybody’s all “oh i almost cried” and everything, and rest assured i have the same thoughts, but i would just like to say when I read mistress elsha hawk’s comment i thought she said emotional pineapple and i cracked up.
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wonderful job, beautiful, flows nicely, amazing!

omg this story is so powerful. You truly are an artist. Words to you is like paint. And man let me tell you, your painting some masterpieces ! This one should be published!