emotionally painted to perfection. I went through the feelings of your characters as they did, and when the tension broke so did mine.

Aww…that’s really sweet. The dialog did seem a bit awkward, though, what Rosamond was saying, but really, really sweet!
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Sad but …. did I understand that this was a guy with a boyfriend? Doesn’t matter if you are young or old, when your mom dies it is hard to deal with. My mother died in 2006 and I still pick up the phone sometimes to call her. She was my friend and I miss her. Life goes on for “us” and we have lots of things to live for. I promise it will get easier! Keep writing!

wow.. I could almost hear this conversation in my mind. Its difficult to witness someone you care about go through this ordeal. It effects everyone to an extent. Another beautifully written story.. This rating system needs more stars!

It’s always comforting to have someone empathize with you and tell you things will get better. Nice dialogue.

So emotional! I could feel what the character was feeling! Very, very good job.
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